Freitag, 27. Januar 2012

Cherries

He picked her like a ripe cherry. Nipping at her skin, rolling her around on his tongue. Then his teeth crushed her, he swallowed the delicious juices and carelessly spit out the pit.

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Response to the weekend challenge on Trifecta: Write a love story in 33 words.

Kommentare:

  1. Oh.My. Hot. Harsh. Well done!! I've known a man or two like that in my time!!

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  2. Oh my yes. This, I think is perfect.

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  3. Awesome. Hot and steamy and so much more...all in 33 words :)

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  4. Ooh saucy, if only it could be longer...:P

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  5. The love of Cherries? Or the kinky association of the woman and the cherry.... Mmmm? Which one? And which bit would be the pit :P X

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    1. A bit of both...literally it's more the kinky bit, metaphorically he chews her up and spits her out once he has "used" her.

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  6. Sexy and cruel, I could taste him eating her alive without regard. Leaving her exposed and raw, used up.
    This was so, so good.
    Came from the Trifextra link.

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  7. Loved this. Been there, too. Did he tie the stem with his tongue as well?
    Over from Trifextra link. Very fun!

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  8. Ooooooh ... ouch. That's the cruelest love, methinks.

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  9. Intense yet a hint of pain and rejection.

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  10. Impressive! You rocked this challenge sexy and dark and he seems a little menacing! Came over from Trifecta!

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  11. Stunning imagery. My favorite from this week.

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  12. Wowza, best of the bunch. If you don’t win, I’ll be shocked. And if I win, I will still be shocked, but not quite as sad for you as I would have been.

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    best,
    MOV

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  13. Wow, Satu, this is good. I love the clever double entendre and also how you use every single one of the 33 words to add something to the story. This was your best one to date. I may have to listen to MOV...

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  14. Awesome! Way to make each one of those 33 words count.

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