Sonntag, 5. Februar 2012

Thin at last

She was glad to see everyone again at her High School reunion. Everybody - even Josh Parker who had always bullied her for being a fatty – complimented her on her tremendous weight loss.
“I’m glad I’ll be remembered for my vibrant personality and the really important achievements in my life,“ she thought bitterly while the cancer was eating away at her insides. 

This was for the Trifextra Weekend Challenge:
For this week's challenge, we are asking you to give us a complete story in three sentences

Kommentare:

  1. oooooooooooooh, brutal.

    best,
    MOV

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  2. ouch! We are a world of people who live on the outside of other people. We forget to dig deeper and get to know the person inside the shell. Nicely done.

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  3. I really like this one... very well-written. It made my heart break a little!

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  4. Excellent twist! With death so close, she can't help but think of such things. But she's not using it to throw in their faces, either.

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  5. I actually gasped. Totally unexpected and quite perfect (and sad.) I'd totally be embittered.

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  6. what a powerful story. great job with the implication and then the twist!

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  7. Wow! Nice. This one might be my favorite.

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  8. Thanks for joining up to our Trifextra Challenge. I love your twist, and really enjoyed how you gave us a complete story here. Past, present, and future all in three sentences. Very nicely done. Hope you'll be back for the weekday challenge.

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  9. Even though I am reading this after the 3 sentence challenge is over, I wanted to write and tell you how good it is. How many of us are not size 2 or 3 and wish for the day that we could be rail thin. But, as someone very wise said, "Be careful what you wish for."

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  10. Even though the three sentence challenge is over, I wanted to write you and tell you how good this is. How many of us are not size 2 or 3 and wish for the day that we could be rail thin. But as a very wise person said, "Be careful what you wish for."

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  11. Clever twist. I like it :) Here to reply (belatedly) to your visit to my author from via Story Damn. X

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